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this wasnt much competition considering its not nearly as good as a knox claymation but its better then alot of the crappy claymations people submit. Try not jolting the camera and just slowing moving it with the frames to make it look smoother. and move your characters slower so it dont look as choppy. It doesnt take long to do most of my claymations like 2-3 hours and I have like 6 of them submitted.